Maybe one day.

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Blue Hell?

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So i recently wrote about how changing from pencil to pen changed my whole life. Here is a story i wrote about 8 years ago…unadulterated, grammatically incorrect, factually revolting with an absolutely pointless plot supported by characterless characters working together to achieve a baseless goal and the macguffin is…….MY URGE TO WRITE SOME SHIT.

Blue hell . revenge of the gayle the inner power
Once there was a gang it had 100 members they call them self blue hell gang .they proctet earth from space army . they had one enemy gayle . they had been fighting for last 50 years. One day gayle invaded milatary base . the captain of gayle was raven. The blue hell was on aa hurry to protect milatary base. Jake was in a party near milatary base . he took his laser gun and ran to proctect it . gayle had tanks , bombers and robot soldiers. They had one revenge on milarty base. Jack and his team had misson to kill revan but when they entered the milarty base there was one tank. jack killed the gunner sitting on tank and team of jack blase off the tank with bazoboka. But revan saw it and tried to kill jack with a missel the missele blased near his leg his face was full of blood his bone was broken . revan send robot to kill jack . whene robot reached to kil him . he crawed near his gun and started killing robots he took one bomb and stand up to throw but he got a bullet on his arm the bomb slipped and fell near robot . boooooom. The bomb blased he and the robot fell outside the entranese jack was fainted . after a while he woke up 5 members wear looking at him .’ he is alive ‘ SHOUTED ONE FO THEM . it was member of blue hell . ‘ where am i ?’ he asked. ‘in top of milatry base’ one ansered . ‘did u kill revan’ he anked. ‘ no ‘ they anserd. ‘ Do u have a sniper ’. ‘yes’one ansred.’ Hear u go’ he give it to jack . he aimed at light house. Boom he fired.after a while when 5 members reached the light house they saw revan died . we won they shouted . jack was alive beacuse of his inner power .

So there it is….im pretty sure you’re laughing your ass off right now. I myself was cursing my wrecked past for writing such heinous stories. I mean bazaboka? missel?
NOTE i actually wrote that shit on word and didn’t bother to correct all those grammatical errors.

BUT. There is a lesson to be learnt here.I improved. I know im not Shakespeare now and i make such lame grammatical errors to this date but i can proudly say I ve exorcised that pure evil polluting the world of literature with such stories xD

I ve met people, who write the way i cud never imagine. They write of worlds I dare not imagine. They write with perfection i cant dream of comparing to.Their words are smoother than the flow of time. Im nothing compared to them. Yet I can proudly claim that I ve come a long way

It is possible to improve. I m not as great as people i ve met, probably cause i gave up on myself after reaching this level of bare minimum. I’m trying to improve, trying to write with words that tear apart your walls, words which rip through your heart. Ofcourse my progress is VERY SLOW, but it’s there.

However for all those who are giving up, for all those who think people are way ahead of you. Please carry on and I guarantee you, you can look at yourself 8 years from now, and laugh at how silly you were.

I myself think I ll look back at this writing and go “oh hey I could written this better.” So don’t stop, Go on, it s well within your reach

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Thank you guys for being my inspiration, for showing me what it means to write.